This song was my first upload on the site, but I revamped the song by adding a sweet solo at the end and created a simple piano part. I got rid of bass and kept the cello and mastered the sound levels. Probably my most emotional, heartfelt song ever, so please give me some feedback!
Not quite finished yet. The choruses are the most developed part. This one is really starting to shape up to be good. Very blink 182-esque, but with my own style. Any comment is much appreciated.
Alright i posted this a while back but the only comment i got was i cant read you spelling so im posting it back cause i want to know if it at lest a good song Lyrics This time I realized that, I really can’t make it right. Please don’t cry. I realized should have had not lie. (Pre chores) By your side!! I left you behind!! Why did I!!? Don’t cry!! My promise I did not keep!! I whist that I could of seen!! (Chores) Please don’t cry. Not this time. I really don’t know why. I promise I will die. If tread drop from your eyes. (Verse 2) Why me? Why can I not see? Why me? I’m sorry for pain. (Pre-chores) Why do I?!! Lie to you!! And now I lost you too!! Please don’t cry!! Not tonight!! I promise I will make it right!! (Chores) Please don’t cry. Not this time. I really don’t know why. I promise I will die. If tread drop from your eyes. (Bridged 1) Don’t cry!! I heat it when you cry!! Not this time!! All because of my lies!! (Bridged 3) Please give me one chance!! To prove to you!! Please give me one chance!! I promise you!! Please give me one chance!! (Chores) Please don’t cry. Not this time. I really don’t know why. I promise I will die. If tread drop from your eyes rate abd comment plase and thank you
This song has a lot of action and i like it.
dude the first part is a little intro separate thing from the next part so fuck you
Been awhile since i've posted anything. Was kicking a few ideas around, but nothing came of 'em. Then i made 'dis, it's my first composition that i've made for the piano(As a leading part anyway), i dunno how to play one myself, and i'm just hoping it's doable, so feedback is appreciated muchly. :]
I've been getting panic attacks off and on the previous month and they're not fucking pretty. It's not done, but here's a musical representation of what I feel during an episode. It's not meant to sound great at parts because it's meant to demonstrate the nature of the attacks. comment and rate:)